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A Disused Shed in Co. Wexford #1: First Step

I’ve chosen to learn the poem “A Disused Shed in Co. Wexford” by Derek Mahon.

Here I am reading it:

The first step would surely be to give some explanation about why I have chosen this particular poem. Obviously the primary reason is because I love it, but exploring my reasons for loving it will perhaps help in the process of learning it by heart. The paucity of rhyme is the first thing I notice, rhyming there definitely is, but it is not the defining pulse of the poem – that is invested in the rigorous structure of six ten line stanzas. I count the beats in a half-hearted manner; each line appears to contain an even number 8, 10 or 12, perhaps this bestows the poem with the feel of rythymic prose which is to my liking. For now that will do; alluding to the rich allegorical and symbolic content of the poem, its links to the survivors of concentration camps, the beauty of the imagery or just how affective the poem is, can all wait. Continue reading

A Disused Shed in Co. Wexford #2: Poetry vs Song Lyrics

As I move on to the second five lines of the first stanza, I think about Steve’s assertion that ‘Disused Shed’ is a long poem to memorize. A lot of words yes, but they are not in an unconnected jumble and, being a long time Bobcat I have no problem remembering all the words to “Like A Rolling Stone”, “Desolation Row” or “Workingman Blues No.2”. Song lyrics are memorable because the music helps to bed them in; it gives them a context other than their meaning. Continue reading

A Disused Shed in Co. Wexford #3: The World Waltzing in its Bowl of Cloud

 

 

 

 

 

Deep in the grounds of a burnt-out hotel,
Among the bathtubs and the washbasins
A thousand mushrooms crowd to a keyhole.

The second stanza; we know immediately that the mushrooms are people. People who are now in misery, where people once used to be in luxury; people who are unable to cleanse themselves (of their sins?), the once functioning facilities remain - bathtubs and washbasins - but now they are burnt out, dried up and useless. Continue reading

A Disused Shed in Co. Wexford #4: A Liturgical Response

 

They have been waiting for us in a foetor
Of vegetable sweat since civil war days,
Since the gravel-crunching, interminable departure
of the expropriated mycologist.
He never came back, and light since then
Is a keyhole rusting gently after rain.
Spiders have spun, flies dusted to mildew
And once a day, perhaps, they have heard something —
A trickle of masonry, a shout from the blue
Or a lorry changing gear at the end of the lane.

These abandoned people are waiting for us to do something; they themselves are disenfranchised and powerless. They had a glimmer of hope, when the mycologist, fungi-scientist, came to inspect them, but discovered that he only had his own professional interests at heart, when he was expropriated or decommissioned he had nurtured no real feeling or sympathy for their plight. On his leaving they had been fully aware of his resolution never to return. Continue reading

A Disused Shed in Co. Wexford #5: Horse Whisperers

There have been deaths, the pale flesh flaking
Into the earth that nourished it;
And nightmares, born of these and the grim
Dominion of stale air and rank moisture.
Those nearest the door growing strong —
‘Elbow room! Elbow room!’
The rest, dim in a twilight of crumbling
Utensils and broken flower-pots, groaning
For their deliverance, have been so long
Expectant that there is left only the posture.

There is a joke told by Milton Jones, a comedian of puns and surreal stories, who as a Christian makes somewhat uncomfortable appearances on the BBC television programme ”Mock The Week” – it concerns Chinese Horse Whisperers who mutter into the ear of a horse and the message is passed down the line from horse to horse until it reaches the last. The punchline is more physical than verbal – Continue reading

A Disused Shed in Co. Wexford #6: Donning the Biohazard Suit

A half century, without visitors, in the dark —
Poor preparation for the cracking lock
And creak of hinges. Magi, moonmen,
Powdery prisoners of the old regime,
Web-throated, stalked like triffids, racked by drought
And insomnia, only the ghost of a scream
At the flashbulb firing squad we wake them with
Shows there is life yet in their feverish forms.
Grown beyond nature now, soft food for worms,
They lift frail heads in gravity and good faith.

Ghost, grown, gravity, good; flashbulb, firing, feverish, food, frail, faith. Alliteration is laid on heavily in the latter lines of this stanza. Not that it was lacking in the first half – poor preparation and powdery prisoners; magi, moonmen. All this helps to provide a unity to the poem, it is the aural dressing that makes it a pleasure to listen to.

The first four stanzas well committed to memory, this fifth is hitting a period where I’ve been busy with other things, life eh! Continue reading

A Disused Shed in Co. Wexford #7: “O coward conscience, how dost thou afflict me!”

They are begging us, you see, in their wordless way,
To do something, to speak on their behalf
Or at least not to close the door again.
Lost people of Treblinka and Pompeii!
‘Save us, save us,’ they seem to say,
‘Let the god not abandon us
Who have come so far in darkness and in pain.
We too had our lives to live.
You with your light meter and relaxed itinerary,
Let not our naive labours have been in vain!’

There is something especially wearisome about tasks that require a laborious repetition that stretches away into far future. When, as a youth, you leave education and take on that first serious nine-to-five job for example. Doesn’t everyone who experiences that particular right of passage get their first true exposure to the terrors of existential futility? The sudden realisation that, in return for an indispensible living wage, this relentless clockwork servitude now holds you forever. The merciless usury of life.

In the state of depression this destructive philosophy can extend itself to everyday tasks – getting up, brushing your teeth, shopping, cleaning, answering the phone. Eventually your whole body is in riotous mutiny against you – demanding to be fed, cleansed and evacuated, itching, aching and twitching, while your mind, a cacophony, is permanently and horrifically conscious – a tirade of critical thoughts railing against your feckless ineptitude. Enough of the black dog.

It is a laborious repetition that we are called to in this final stanza. We should put aside the light jibe about the light meter and relaxed itinery and consider the full implication of acknowledging the pleas of the disenfranchised. The downtrodden, like the poor, will always be with us and to take on responsibility for their well-being is a serious and oppressive obligation.

The Walrus and the Carpenter
Were walking close at hand;
They wept like anything to see
Such quantities of sand:
“If this were only cleared away,”
They said, “it would be grand!”

“If seven maids with seven mops
Swept it for half a year.
Do you suppose,” the Walrus said,
“That they could get it clear?”
“I doubt it,” said the Carpenter,
And shed a bitter tear.

Are the Walrus’ and Carpenter’s tears sincere? Or is their sorrow hypocritical? On one hand they are dismissing any thought of beginning the sweeping process themselves, on the other they are recognising the futility of even beginning such a task.

Are we similarly spiritually hobbled when we appease ourselves with a monthly direct debit to our favourite charity or react to the raw emotional implorings of some widely advertised disaster appeal with a financial contribution? Do we throw down a pound coin in the hat of a homeless beggar knowing it is likely to be spent on alcohol or do we donate to a homeless charity that is helpless in the face of such a tsunami of misery?

These are difficult questions because they dig at the heart of our own morality. Are our personal actions always self-serving even when they purport to be charitable?

Personally I believe the answer lies in the political sphere, rather than the personal one. We prefer this game of ineffective voluntary contributions and philanthropy because it by-passes our true responsibility. And that is t
No such political party exists, or at least none of our political parties are prepared to place human rights as an issue above those of the economy, education, health, employment, housing and so on. Perhaps they are right not to do so, but I feel that their current justification for doing so is that the popular press would ensure that they were totally unelectable should they opt for making human rights the cornerstone of their political manifesto.o support and vote for a political party that will redirect re

sources from maintaining our comfortable middle class existence into policies that are truly comprehensive, encompassing all people and upholding the ideals of the International Bill of Human Rights which consists of the Universal Declaration of Human Rights (adopted in 1948), the International Covenant on Civil and Political Rights (1966) with its two Optional Protocols and the International Covenant on Economic, Social and Cultural Rights (1966).